Formatting Speech Transcript

When you transcribe the speeches you make in class. Please add your name, student ID, speech file number, and date the speech was made to the paper. Then transcribe your speech exactly as you recorded it. Next, copy and paste your speech below the original recording's transcript. Then edit your speech. Remember, your edited speech should be between 90 and 100 words. Follow the structural format we looked at in Independent Speaking Structure. Finally add a word count to both parts of your transcript.

Before you edit your speech, think carefully about the weaknesses in your original speech. Ask yourself the following questions.
Was the structure OK?
Were my ideas too simple?
What were the grammar mistakes and how should I change them.
Was my vocabulary too simple?
Was my speech a shopping list?

Please format your paper like the example below.

Name, Student ID, Class Speech file number, Date speech was made.   Original speech: Transcribe your original speech exactly as it was spoken on the recording. Add expressions like eh, um, ah, if you daid them. (word count e.g. 22 words) Edited speech: Look at you original speech and think carefully about its weaknesses. Was the structure OK? Were your ideas too simple? Think about the grammar mistakes you made. Think about the vocabulary you used. Think about all of these things and then take your original speech and edit it. Turn it into a 'perfect' speech. Follow the structural guidelines that we looked at in class. Make sure your speech has a topic statement, two main points and enough explanation for the main points. Remember that it is in a fluent explanation of your main points that you can get a high score. When you are finished editing you perfect speech add a word count. (112 words)

Now put your paper in the correct report box.