TOEFL iBT Integrated Writing : Roads

Reading passage
One definition of a road is that it  is a way between two places that has been improved in some way to make travel easier. The first ‘roads’ were simple pathways that probably followed the routes that animals take as they wander around the countryside. Roads have a very long history. Streets paved with stone were built in the Mesopotamian city of Ur some 6,000 years ago, and corduroy roads (roads created by placing logs side by side) dated to around the same time have been found in the south of England. Later roads were specifically constructed to allow faster travel for soldiers, government officials and eventually traders.

One of the great road builders of ancient times was Darius I, king of Persia. In 500 BCE,He ordered the construction of the Royal Road that stretched from Sardis on the western coast of what is now Turkey to Susa in what is now Iran. On this road, Darius’ mounted messengers could travel 2,700 kilometers in only seven days using relays of horses. Probably the greatest road builders of antiquity, however, were the Romans. Beginning around about 300 BCE, Roman roads were built mostly by the Roman army as it campaigned against Rome’s enemies, Roman roads were constructed in as straight a line as possible and were paved. As the empire expanded, so did the road network and eventually more than 80,000 kilometers of paved roads crisscrossed the Roman Empire in Europe, North Africa and the Near East. Roads, however, are expensive to build and need a strong central government to maintain them. When the Persian and Roman empires declined, their road networks declined with them. (275)

Main idea: roads in the ancient world
MP 1: --- roads very old
                 -- paved streets Ur 4,000 BCE
                 -- corduroy roads S. England 6,000 years ago
MP2: --- Darius I (Persia) great road builder, Royal Road
                --  2,500 years ago
                --  Sardis to Susa
                -- Royal messengers (horsemen) cover 2,700 km in seven days
MP3: --- Romans prob greatest road builders
                -- begin 300 BCE
                -- built by army on campaign, empire bigger, more roads
                -- straight, paved
                -- 80,000 km
MP3: --- roads expensive build and maintain, so empire declines roads decline


Listening passage
If roads in ancient times had been primarily for the use of armies and government business, the coming of the agricultural and industrial revolutions in Europe in the 18th century created a need for roads to facilitate trade and the movement of goods and people from one place to another. This could only be made possible if a method of constructing roads could be developed that was not impossibly expensive and produced roads that were useable in all weathers. One of the first people to do this was a Scottish engineer by the name of John Macadam, spelt M-A-C-A-D-A-M. Macadam continued the work of earlier French and English road builders but his breakthrough was to realize that massive heavy rocks used as a foundation for a road were not necessary. This made roadbuilding csimpler and cheaper. In the early 19th century, Macadam perfected a road structure that had three layers. The first layer was made up of stones of a maximum size of 75 millimeters. This layer was compacted, pushed together, by a heavy roller. Another identical layer of 75 millimeter stones was laid down and again compacted. Finally a top layer of smaller stones of 25 millimeters was added. This kind  of road was known as a ‘macadamised’ road. The most important advantage of macadamized roads was that they were usable in any kind of weather. The ‘macadamized’ road really was the first ‘modern’ road and revolutionized road transport. It led to the vast road networks that we all take for granted today. (244)

Main idea: the beginning of modern roads
MP 1: --- 18th C Agric & Ind rev. create demand for roads
            --  must be inexpensive, all-weather
MP2   --- John Macadam one of first to provide new roads
            -- Mac knew big rock foundation unnecessary, simpler, cheaper
MP3: -- Macadam made three-layer roads
            --  1st layer stones 75 mm max, compacted
            --  2nd layer stones 75 mm max, compacted
            --  3rd layer stones 25 mm max, compacted
MP4: -- Macadamised roads first modern roads
            --  changed road transport
            --  led to today's network

Sample essay 1
In this set of materials, the reading passage discusses roads in ancient times, and the listening passage describes the beginnings of modern roads.

The reading passage informs us that the concept of a road is very old indeed. It is known that about 6,000 years ago paved streets existed in the city of Ur and roads made of logs were in use in England. Some 2,500 years ago, the Persian king, Darius I, built his royal road which linked the coast of modern-day Turkey with Iran. Using this road the king could send messages at the astonishing speed of almost 400 km a day. A few hundred years later, Roman armies built roads as they moved to fight Rome's enemies. These Roman roads were straight and had a paved surface. The Roman road network eventually reached about 80,000 km, making them probably the greatest of all ancient road builders. The purpose of roads in ancient times was usually to allow armies and government officials to move more quickly, and without a strong government the roads began to deteriorate.

The listening passage tells us about the work of the road builder John Macadam. The economic growth of the Industrial and Agricultural revolutions created a demand for new roads. Macadam was one man who helped meet this demand. He was an engineer who developed a method of creating roads that did not need massive rock foundations, and were thus easier to make. He created roads made of three layers of crushed then compacted stones. The first two layers used stones that were at most 75mm in size. Each layer was compacted. Finally a layer of smaller 25mm stones was laid and compacted. 'Macadamised' roads were important because they were undamaged by bad weather. They were in fact the first roads we can call modern. (302)

Sample essay 2
In this set of materials, the reading passage discusses roads in ancient times, and the listening passage describes the beginnings of modern roads.

The reading passage informs us that roads are a very old idea. Roads existed in Mesopotamia and England in 4,000 BCE. Some 2,500 years ago, the Persian king, Darius I, built his royal road from Sardis to Susa. Messengers could at almost 400 km a day on this road. Later, Roman armies built roads as they moved to fight Rome's enemies. The Roman road network eventually reached about 80,000 km, making them probably the greatest of all ancient road builders. The purpose of roads in ancient times was usually to allow armies and government officials to move more quickly.

The listening passage tells us about the work of the road builder John Macadam. Economic growth in the 18th century made more roads necessary. Macadam was an engineer who developed a method of creating roads that did not need massive rock foundations, and were thus easier to make. He created roads made of three layers of crushed then compacted stones. The first two layers used stones that were at most 75mm in size. Each layer was compacted. Finally a layer of smaller 25mm stones was laid and compacted. 'Macadamised' roads were important because they were undamaged by bad weather. They were in fact the first roads we can call modern. (232)