Topic: What is your favorite season?

Although winter and spring have their charms, I think I like autumn best, mainly because it follows summer which I hate. In autumn the weather is cool but not cold and after a Tokyo summer which is very, very hot, autumn is a relief. In addition, the mosquitoes disappear. I really hate mosquitoes so I’m very happy when the cooler weather makes them vanish. Because it’s cool and there are no mosquitoes, autumn is the time to enjoy ourselves out of doors. We can enjoy picnics, playing in the park and barbecues in autumn, so that’s probably why I like it the most.

Now compare to the plan.

Topic Statement: I like autumn most.

Main point 1: cool, not hot

Main point 2: no mosquitoes

Main point 3: enjoy outside