TOEFL iBT Independent Writing 1

It is essential that before you start writing your essay you must plan it. If you do not do this, you will lose focus and your essay will start to drift. You must decide
1) Your thesis statement
2) The general ideas that support your thesis statement
3) The specific details that support your general ideas

If we think back to the 'Which do you prefer, tea or coffee?' sample essay:
the thesis statement was
I prefer tea
the general ideas were
healthier, tastier, cheaper
the specific ideas were
1) ancient belief, 2) prevent cancer, 3) reduce stress, 4) less calories
1) mild and smooth, 2) not bitter, 3) subtle
1) bottle, 2) loose leaves, 3) teabags

One way to quickly make a plan is to draw a simple concept map. Here is a concept map made for the
'Which do you prefer, tea or coffee?' sample essay.
concept map tea

Notice how the concept map is hierarchical, that means it is composed of layers. At the top thesis statement, then one level down the general ideas, then finally at the bottom the specific details that support the general ideas.
Always make a plan before writing your essay.

Task 1: Look back at sample essay 1. Try to recreate the writer's plan for this essay using a concept map.
Task 1: Look back at sample essay 2. Try to recreate the writer's plan for this essay using a concept map.

Task 1: Look back at sample essay 3. Try to recreate the writer's plan for this essay using a concept map.

Always make a plan before writing your essay.

Have a look at another style of concept map